​Our revision plan is to change our major focus on the story. We are going to focus on Dr. Dennis Mukwege and why Vanessa feels he is so important to her decision about studying fetal health. We are going to add our interview questions on a black screen before her answers. Also, we feel that it’s important to add “onscreen text” to express who Vanessa is and where she came from without her speaking it. We feel that it is necessary to cut out the information involving her move from Congo to Thailand to America because she does not speak much about her transition. We feel that it makes more sense to focus on her future and desires to help her community both here and internationally. We also are going to add b-roll of the Roger Williams Campus as well as images of Vanessa and her activities on campus.